Tuesday, 24 October 2017
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Hi Chris, My name is Fadlan and I am a student in Te Waka Ako from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked your slideshow and how you talked about the tanks. This reminds me of an ANZAC slideshow I did earlier this year. Next time you could add more pictures but it was still good. If you want to see my learning my blog is wpsfadlans.blogspot.co.nz
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DeleteHI MY NAME IS CHRIS AS U ALREADY KNOW THX FOR YOUR COMMENT HOPE YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WORK IS BETTER THEN MINE LATTER
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ReplyDeleteHi Chris my name is Qais and im from te waka ako. I am a student in Waikowhai Primary school. I really like the way you have talked about tanks and how you have explained it. It reminded me of once when I did blog about ANZAC DAY this year. next time you could add more stuff about the war like people who saved their comrades and guns.
ReplyDeleteif you would like to see my blog wpsqaiso.blogspot.co.nz
Okay thx for your feed back on my work I will love to check out your blog hope it better then my work :)
DeleteI really liked your blog but maybe next time make your blog a bit shorter.I liked how you put your blog into a slide show and the start was cool also I liked the topic.This kind of reminds me of the time a year ago when me and my class went to a museum and we went to the war exhibit. Come check out my blog here is the link http://wpsriceman.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteOK I WILL CHECK OUT YOUR BLOG THX FOR U FEED BACK THIS WILL HELP MY IMPROVE MY WORK DAB.
DeleteHi Chris my name is Pila and i got to Waikowhai primary School.I like how you are writing about tanks and world war 1,i would like to now where you got the information and what is AA guns are.i think you did very good on your blog post, next time i think you should right how they made it and what they use to make it.And this reminds me when i was doing a blog about world war to.if you would like to see my blog here is my link http://wpspilal.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHI my name is Jordan form Waikowhai Primary school i like your post about tanks because I like tanks to and nest time you shod make your witting bigger because wen you zoom in to reading it you can read it but when you zoom out your witting is small and NO mun can read
ReplyDeleteand you shod ad more photo in your work .
Hi Chris, my name is Shivneel and I'm from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you explained a lot of facts also it reminded me of Anzac day at our school. Where did you find all of the info and if you want to check out my blog here a link http://wpsshivneelr.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi there i am Josh from Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka Ako. I liked how you explained lots about tanks in world war one. It was really interesting and it reminded when my great grandfather fought in world war one. Maybe you could check my blog - http://wpsjoshuac.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteH my name is Sebastian and im a student of Te Waka Ako I really like how you wrote about world war I and freedom.
ReplyDeleteI also think that next time you could talk about trench guns and war II.
it reminded me of the time i had to do research on world war.
if you wanna see my work heres a link
wpssebastiana.blogspot.co.nz
hi chris t,this fetuli i like your work and sentences it was great,and awesome
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