SUBMARINE
WHY DID PEOPLE USE THE SUBMARINE IN THE WAR ?
I THINK THAT THEY USE THE SUBMARINE IN THE WAR AROUND THE World SO THEY CAN SNEAK UP ON THE OPPONENTS AND ENEMIES to shoot missiles under Water.
You may have seen a submarine on television or in the movies. This large, powerful underwater vessel is a cool way to explore below the sea.
The submarine is used to take people below the sea to find out mysteries that have not been showed to the word.
Do you know what submarines do ?
They help people that are in the navy and they help others explore the sea and find out the hidden secret.
The submarine is about 170m long that is very long I can not believe that it that long.
There are many vehicle that can go under water the most communion vehicle is a submarine it is a large powerful underwater machine.
Chris T
12 SEPTEMBER 2016
Thursday, 15 September 2016
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Hi Chris, its Amanda the vocab you used was really good and it made your writing better. But you should change the capital letters into lower case the only time you use the capital letter is after a full stop, when someone is shouting and beginning of the story.
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ReplyDeletehello chris i like how you put good and amazing words in there. i love it because i read it. it was so nice to read it because it have so nice good amazing words in there. i really love it.
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